lowlow ([info]murderouslowlow) wrote,
@ 2008-03-21 23:37:00
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Entry tags:hitsugaya; fanfiction; bleach

FF: Bleach
Title: A Taicho Returns
Author: Lizzie aka murderouslowlow[Unknown LJ tag]</lj>
Genre: WHUMMPAAAAAGEEE/Action/Drama
Pairing(s): Nope. No pairings for Hitsu
Rating: PG13+
Warnings: Hitsu gets hurt a lot? lol.
Disclaimer: Not mine! All Kubo Tite's! I'm just playing in his sandbox when he's not watching. *CACKLE*
Summary: It's been three years since he had gone into the war. It's been three years since he was defeated by Ichimaru Gin. It's been three years since he's zunpakuto broke, making this dragon tattoo appear on his wrist. It's been three years since he's been a prisoner in Hueco Mundo. It's been three years since everyone in Seireitei thought he was dead.

But... they were wrong.

This story is about Hitsu getting saved from Hueco Mundo, taken back to Seireitei and is taking his recovery in baby steps. But will he manage to fully recover before the other war? And what about the dragon Tattoo?

Link: (will have one soon. After Fanfiction.com let's me. <.<)


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The small room was very dark and cold. Very little light seemed to get in from the small crack under the large metal door. The room was silent as well only to the exception of the shallow breathes coming from a young man.

His white hair which he was known by was filthy. Instead of the shining white, it was of a dirty gray. His face was as pale as the moon, and his eyes had lost the usual glimmer they held. His clothes were ragged and contained a few bloodstains at some certain spots. The young man looked exhausted as a hand clenched tightly onto his left side. He had leaned his head back onto the wall, trying his best to not wince at the pain. He was not going to show weakness. No matter what'll happen. He will never do it.

"Lil' taiichooooo," called a voice from behind the metal door, amusement in his tone. "Yo' still alive?"

No reply.

"Awww, com' on Lil'taiichoo," the man teased, as he unlocked the door. Once the door was unlocked, he pushed it, letting a lot of light come in. And that had made the young man squint. He hadn't seen the light in a very long time, which made sense to why his eyes were so sensitive to it.

As footsteps could be heard, the young man pulled his knees up to his chest with a small wince and turned his head to the other side, not wanting to look at the older man.

"Tch. Lil'taicho shuldn' be like dat!" The man smirked, tilting his head to the side to have a better look at the boy. His hands were shackled as well as his feet. He had been wearing something around his neck, which kept the boy from using his reiatsu. "Well, since yo' ain't talkin' to me. I jus' came to tell ya that Aizen-sama is plannin' to do sumthin' wit' ya. Yo' shuld be happy. Not many prisoners get ter have dat much fun," he smiled, turned his back to the boy and taking a few steps towards the door.

"Oh. And Lil'taicho shuld eat his food. Wouldn' want Lil'taicho dead, now don't we?" And with that he walked out of the small room, shutting the door behind him and locking it.

He was alone again. Silence was somewhat of a friend to him right now. Most of the things he heard in these times were either someone telling him about his next torture, his own screams and cries of agony filling the room and their laughs.

Their laughs.

They echoed in this room sometimes, making him shudder. But he wasn't afraid of them. He wasn't afraid of any of them! He was a warrior, and a captain.

Well, probably an ex-captain now.

How long has he been gone? Sighing, he moved his body a bit so that he would end up lying his back on the cold floor. As he looked up into the darkness, he kept thinking. Thinking was a reason that kept him going on in a place like this. The second thing was, everyone back in Seireitei was expecting him back. Unless, they thought he was dead.

Sometimes, he thought about them. The people who were in Seireitei. Had they thought he was truly dead? Maybe they had since they have seen him fight with Ichimaru Gin, the man that had just entered the room. God he wanted to kill him. He almost did, if it wasn't for his zanpakuto stabbing him right bellow his heart.

Slowly, he moved his hand to lightly touch his scar. That was the first scar he had gotten from this place. And after that same scar, the others came down on him like the rain coming down onto the ground with its rapid speed.

Tightly shutting his eyes, he tried his best to suppress the painful memories of that day.

Pain. Blood. Cries. Injuries. Shouts. Yells. Killings. Arrancar. Pain. Blood. Blood. Blood. Blood. Blood. Matsumoto. Cries. Yells. Shouts. Hinamori. Killings. Pain. Yells. Cries. Blood. Kurosaki. Cries. Yells. Injuries. Pain. Quincy. Inoue. Sado. Blood. Blood. Blood. Blood. Blood. Taichos. Fukutaichos. Screams. Agony. Yells. Cries. Shouts. Blood. Blood. Blood. Hyorinmaru…

Hyorinmaru.
As he repeated that name in his head over and over, he tightly held onto himself. How long has it been since his blade broke? How long has it been since he felt Hyorinmaru's presence? It has been too long, just too long.
A tear rolled down his cheek and he quickly wiped it away. Ashamed with himself for being weak at that very moment, he rolled on his side and slowly lowered his right sleeve. Staring at the small dragon tattoo that had appeared on his wrist after his blade broke, he weakly smiled, feeling reassured that maybe, just maybe everything will be alright.

With that, he took a deep breath and waited for what Aizen had for him. But, he knew what would happen. Surely it would be a one on one with an Espada.

Not paying much attention, the door swung open, showing five figures standing.

"Get up, Hitsugaya." Chuckled one of the figures, as the other two approached him. One of the men grabbed onto the boy's hand shackles and furiously lifted him up , making him almost fly across the room. The moment he was up, another man pushed him so he would fall down again.

Toshiro fell on his knees and winced as the pain on his left side increased. Panting, he looked up at the blue haired Espada with a death defying glare.

"Come on, get up. Aizen-sama said we can play."


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SO! Haha. This is my FIRST Bleach FF. And... It's about Hitsu. *sigh* Anyway, I hope you guys liked the first chappie. I'll edit this post tomorrow and put all of that behind a link. =]

Comments? You know I love them! :D 






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[info]jaded_optimist
2008-03-22 06:55 pm UTC (link)
NEENERS!!!! My first Bleach FanFiction ever and it's by you. That alone is awesome and this just as awesome. Haha That sentence made little to no sense at all. Anyways... I basically already told you what I thought on MSN, but I will say it again. I liked it a lot.

^_^v

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[info]padieblack
2008-03-22 08:30 pm UTC (link)
To be sincere, I don't get half of what you wrote there since I never watched Bleach but DARN it is well written =D

<333

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[info]zoldyck_fan
2008-03-23 07:33 pm UTC (link)
This looks like it has the potential to become a pretty interesting story, but I do have one question.

Have you ever read any of the Bleach fanfictions I've posted on this site, particularly one called Treading Icy Waters?

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[info]murderouslowlow
2008-03-24 06:31 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. =]

And, yes. I am really a fan of that and to be honest, it was one of the FFs that gave me the kick to write this one.

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[info]zoldyck_fan
2008-03-24 06:49 pm UTC (link)
I could tell. I'm glad my fic inspired you; it always makes me feel good when I hear that. Just try to be more careful from now on when writing while inspired. I know you had no intention of doing anything of the sort, but a certain technique you used was very, very close to my own to the point that it could be mistaken for plagiarism. Be sure to be more original and true to yourself in the future, alright?

I look forward to see where you take this fic. I've always been a sucker for a good Hitsugaya kidnapping story. (:

And just out of curiosity, have you also read a couple of fictions titled Dry Heat and Cold Rain?

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[info]murderouslowlow
2008-03-24 06:51 pm UTC (link)
<.< Ouch. lolol. I am so sorry, I really didn't mean to do anything of that sort. I guess I wasn't paying attention to what I wrote and I'll be sure to be careful next time.

And for your second question, no. I haven't read those. <.< Did I copy something out of that too? *hides*

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[info]zoldyck_fan
2008-03-24 08:01 pm UTC (link)
That's what I figured. But now you know, so I can trust you won't make the same mistakes again in the future. So good luck, ne?

And, no, not at all. ^^ This story just reminds me of them. If you haven't read them, you should. They're truly amazing.

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[info]murderouslowlow
2008-03-25 05:33 pm UTC (link)
Of course I won't do the same mistake over again. I'll make sure I won't. I promise. =]

Oh thank GOD! I was so worried that I copied something off of her and I really dislike it and I didn't realize I did the same to yours. *sigh* I will read them since you've suggest them, they sound good. =D

And, thank you so much for reading this. You have no idea how happy I was when I saw you comment. lolol.

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