helloshoe (![[info]](http://l-stat.livejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} helloshoe) wrote in murderouslowlow, |
You are impressively fast, I give you that. I agree, this was a good chapter, but it does show that you wrote it very quickly. Please be putting a bit more attention into individual sentences next time, ok, there are missing prepositions and stuff. Don't be so hasty! *is an ent :D*
